学生写作时，如果仅局限在把内容交代清楚的水准上，只选用一些普通的、直截了当的词，或一律使用简单句平铺直叙，那么，这样写出来的文章就会像一碗白开水，呆板、单调，没有可读性。要使文章耐人寻味、有深度，同学们就应尝试使用一些高级词汇或句型，以凸显文章的亮点，使文章增添文采，给读者(尤其是阅卷老师留下深刻印象)。具体说来，同学们可尝试以下方法：

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　　1. 灵活改变句子开头

　　在通常情况下，英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”，即主语位于句子开头。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式，比如使用倒状语或以状语开头等，会使文章增强表现力。如： 内容来自dongdongliu

　　(1) There stands an old temple at the top of the hill. dongdongliu.com

　　→ At the top of the hill there stands an old temple.

　　在小山顶上有一座古庙。

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　　(2) You can do it well only in this way.

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　　→ Only in this way can you do it well. 织梦内容管理系统

　　只有这样你才能把它做好。 copyright dongdongliu

　　(3) A young woman sat by the window.

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　　→ By the window sat a young woman.

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　　窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。

　　2. 避免重复使用同一词语 织梦内容管理系统

　　为了使表达更生动，更富表现力，同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思，尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字，就会立刻想起like，事实上，英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多，如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。如： 本文来自织梦

　　I like reading while my brother likes watching television. copyright dongdongliu

　　→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television. 织梦好，好织梦

　　我喜欢看书，而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。 内容来自dongdongliu

　　3. 合理使用省略句 内容来自dongdongliu

　　合理恰当地使用省略句，不仅可以使文章精练、简洁，而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。如：

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　　(1) He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now? copyright dongdongliu

　　→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?

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　　他可能很忙，要是这样，我以后再来拜访。要是不忙，我现在可以见他吗?

　　(2) If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.

　　→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not. 内容来自dongdongliu

　　如果天气好，我们就去;如果天气不好，我们就不去了。

　　(3) She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so. 织梦内容管理系统

　　→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.

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　　她本可申请这份工作的，但她没有。 本文来自织梦

　　4. 适当运用非谓语结构

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　　非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构，适当运用非谓语结构，会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。如：

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　　(1) When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy. 内容来自dongdongliu

　　→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy. 织梦好，好织梦

　　听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。 本文来自织梦

　　(2) As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her. 织梦好，好织梦

　　→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her. 织梦好，好织梦

　　由于不知道她的地址，我没法和她联系。 copyright dongdongliu

　　(3) As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

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　　→ Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

　　他出生农民家庭，只上过两年学。 copyright dongdongliu

　　5. 结合使用长句与短句 copyright dongdongliu

　　在英语写作中，过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是，根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。如：

　　At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. 织梦好，好织梦

　　→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess. 内容来自dongdongliu

　　中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后，我们唱的唱歌，跳的跳舞，还有的讲笑话、下棋，大家玩得很开心。

　　6. 适当使用短语代替单词 dongdongliu.com

　　(1) He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.

　　→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up. dongdongliu.com

　　他已决定长大了当老师。

　　(2) He doesn't like music.

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　　→ He doesn't care much for music.

　　他不大喜欢音乐。

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　　(3) He told me that the question was now under discussion.

　　→ He told me that the question was now being discussed. 本文来自织梦

　　他告诉我问题现正正在讨论中。 本文来自织梦

　　7. 恰当套用某些固定表达 内容来自dongdongliu

　　(1) He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther. 织梦好，好织梦

　　→ He was too tired to walk any farther. 织梦好，好织梦

　　他太累了，不能再往前走了。

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　　(2) The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.

　　→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.

　　这电影很有趣，学生和老师都很喜欢。

　　(3) Your son is old. He can look after himself now. 本文来自织梦

　　→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.

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　　你的儿子已经长大，可以自己照顾自己了。

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　　8. 尽量使句子带点“洋味”

　　(1) Don't worry. Be bold and try it, and you'll learn it soon. dongdongliu.com

　　→Don't worry. Just go for it, and you'll get it soon. 本文来自织梦

　　别担心，大胆试一试，你很快就会学会的。

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　　(2) Thank you for playing with us.

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　　→Thank you for sharing the time with us. 织梦好，好织梦

　　谢谢你陪我玩。 织梦内容管理系统

　　9. 综合使用各类所谓的“高级”结构 dongdongliu.com

　　(1) Now everyone knows the news. I think Jim must have let it out.

　　→ Now everyone knows the news. I think it must have been Jim who has let it out.

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　　现在人人都知道这消息了，我想一定是吉姆把它泄露出去的。

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(2) We had to stand there to catch the offender.

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